The story here is how nature and human development are separated by a barrier indicated by the fence. At the top right of the frame a solitary leaning stalk of grass stands out, prone to the pollution and destruction brought about by humans.Received feedback that there was too much details in the first draft. This is now edited to show the ships in outlines and perspective. Then the attention would be on the oil rig instead, to represent development.

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